PLAGIARISM:  DO’S AND DON’TS

By Amy Sterling Casil

 

 

 

        In my other "day job," I’m a science fiction/fantasy writer.  Writers are concerned about Internet plagiarism in a different way from college students and professors.  More and more often, people are stealing the work of professional writers and putting it on the Internet for "free."  This means that writers lose out on legitimate royalties that they earn from having their work published in books, magazines, or via Internet sites that pay fairly.

As a college teacher, though, I am concerned about regular old classroom plagiarism.  The meaning of the word plagiarism in college is very simple:  students copy writing that they did not do, and turn it in with their names on it.  In the days before the Internet, some students made good money by writing papers for other students, or by offering their old papers for sale.  There were "mail order" services where students could buy papers on the topics they needed.  These methods required time and extra planning.  There was no way you could get a paper through the mail-order service at midnight the night before a paper was due.

    But now, the Internet is available, and students can get a paper an hour before class.  They can also "cut and paste" paragraphs or whole pages from different web sites, depending upon the subject of their paper.  Sometimes students don’t realize that they are plagiarizing when they copy or "cut and paste" entire sections of web pages without citing them, or giving credit to the original authors.  There is an easy solution to this type of plagiarism:  every time you use a web page for information, be sure to quote it, paraphrase it, and cite it.  Even better, rewrite the information in your own words, and cite it.  Your professors may not think that you have done a lot of original work, and they might not like that you were using the Internet so much, but you won’t be plagiarizing.  In fact, visiting these web pages and reading the information is something that all professors encourage students to do:  research.

  Most professors -- and yes, we do live in the "real world" - come down hard on "cut and paste" plagiarism.  But the more serious type of plagiarism is out-and-out copying a paper from the Internet and putting your name on it.  You can buy one of these papers quickly and easily.  Right now, the average cost is $8.95 a page.  So, a ten-page essay costs $90.00.  Some sites even offer services that will write a whole paper individually for you, following any format you want.  These services cost $30 a page, up to $60 a page for "rush delivery."  So, you would spend between $300 and $600 for this type of ten-page paper.  A deal, huh?  Maybe if your parents are paying $2,000 or more per class, per semester, they might not think this was such a "great deal."  If you’re paying for college yourself, then I am not writing this essay for you:  you already know what a "great deal" it is.

  There are also many "free" essay sites on the Internet.  The temptation to save time and money is probably very strong for some people.  Why not just visit one of these sites and find a paper similar to the one you’ve been assigned?  Just copy it into your handy word-processing program, put your name on it, maybe even change a few words here and there, and turn it in.

Your teacher will never know.  Wrong!

 

The chance that you take is that your instructor may not have the Internet search skills to find the original source paper on the Internet.  Any alert teacher will see that there’s "something wrong" with this copied paper that you turned in.

  How can the teacher know?

  Well, the emphasis in college teaching is not on discovering plagiarism, it’s on learning and growth.  Experienced teachers aren’t just familiar with your own writing over the course of a semester, we have read hundreds, and even thousands, of student papers over the years.  Nearly every professor in every discipline can "smell a rat."  We know, usually after reading only a few sentences of a plagiarized paper, that this writing was not done by the student who turned it in.  Each professor in each discipline has his or her own reasons for coming to these conclusions.  In Sociology, they may recognize phrases or terms that came from a familiar article, but which are uncited and uncredited.  In History, the professor may recognize the ideas and writing style of a famous historian - and the chances that this historian would be "reincarnated" as a student in his class are pretty slim.  And in English?  Well, any good English teacher can tell you exactly why they believe a plagiarized paper is not the work of a particular student.  We teach grammar, syntax, and structure.  So, when those elements of a paper are different from anything a student has written before, either out-of-class or in-class papers, then English teachers have specific, objective cause to think that a paper could be plagiarized.

If you’re going to be a successful plagiarist, you also have to understand the "level of writing" that appears in different college courses.  Since most students do not plagiarize, and do their own work - for better or worse! - professors in all disciplines are familiar with the general range of papers that they see in each of their classes, from Freshman to graduate-level.  Any time a paper outside that "range" comes across their desk, professors have reason to question that paper’s legitimacy.  Ask yourself whether the subject matter and level of diction in a graduate-level paper is really going to "fly" in a Freshman English class.  It doesn’t matter if this is a "good" or a "bad" graduate-level paper.  By the time any student gets to graduate school, they are writing differently and expressing themselves differently than students who are starting out in college.

Let’s say that you are in an English class, where you discuss material, take notes, have exams or quizzes, and papers are assigned on various topics.  Let’s say that during the course of the semester, you study Hamlet.  You, and about four million other students across America!  Often, professors will assign papers on topics that aren’t "popular," or that are related to stories or poems that aren’t extremely well-known.  In that case, if you’re a dedicated plagiarist, you know that you probably can’t find a "free" Internet paper that will match the assigned topic.  You’ve got to choose the "paper written especially for you" option discussed earlier.  However, let’s say that you are studying one of the works that everyone goes through. Hamlet, Othello, Macbeth, or Oedipus the King.  Compare and contrast any of those plays.  A quick Internet search will give you scores of free essay options.  

Should you choose one of them?

          Unless your professor is truly "asleep at the wheel" - No!

          Your topic might be "typical," but it’s very unlikely that any of these hundreds - even thousands - of Internet papers are going to match what was discussed in your individual class.

          Here is a sentence from a paper on Hamlet that I recently received from a Freshman English student:  "But Fortinbras was not prepared to accept his constitutional dispossession so easily" (Artist_of_1999 1).

          You know, I never knew that!

          Let’s break it down.  First of all, the sentence begins with "But."  Most college Freshmen won’t do this, because they’ve been taught in high school not to do this.  It’s not "wrong," and it’s actually a hallmark of more sophisticated writing.  A confident, experienced writer does sometimes begin sentences with conjunctions, like "and" or "but."  Then we come to the phrase, "constitutional dispossession."  You don’t need an advanced degree to recognize this as an "academic pedanticism."  In everyday language, that means "what the bull does after he eats."  This type of phrase might appear in an upper-division or graduate-level history paper.  

What does it mean?  Why did I say, "I never knew that!"  Because at the beginning of the play, the three watchmen talk about how Fortinbras is raising an army to get back his lands that were taken from his father, the King of Norway, after he lost a war with Hamlet’s father.  "Constitutional dispossession" is just plain wrong.  This phrase describes what happened to Mad King George during the Revolutionary War.  The colonies banded together to fight for freedom against the British mercenaries (as seen in the movie The Patriot).  George Washington didn’t become the first U.S. President by pouring poison in King George’s ear while he slept.  

          If I hadn’t read that phrase, none of these issues would have crossed my mind.  "Constitutional dispossession" is a pointless anachronism.  After reading this one sentence, I knew that this paper did not come out of my class.  

          When confronted with the evidence that this paper existed in three separate, identical copies on the Internet, and questioned about the writing and ideas, the student insisted that an unknown party had stolen this paper from her computer, and put it on the Internet without her knowledge.  "Anyone can steal anything from your hard drive."  Mmm-hmm.  Well, I would think they would be more motivated to steal your credit card number or other valuable personal information, but what do I know?  Obviously, they’re hacking computers looking for priceless "Hamlet" papers.

          "You don’t think that I write well enough to have written this paper?" the student said, angrily.

          "It’s not very well-written," I said.  I really didn’t have time to explain about "academic pedanticisms," what bulls do after they eat, and what a "constitution" was, because we were talking about very serious matters.  "It’s written differently from your other writing this semester, and it’s written at a different level from all Freshman English papers."

          The student had already committed herself to lying in addition to cheating.  The paper didn’t talk about any of the ideas - pro or con - we’d discussed in class, and it certainly wasn’t the type of writing that I teach or encourage or reward.  That type of writing would be clear, understandable and straightforward.  That’s why my University pays me, and why people pay the University good money to be in my classes.  

          I guess that smarter people than me could explain why a student thought she could "skate by" copying this paper off the Internet, or who believed that I wouldn’t do exactly what I did - decide after a few sentences that she hadn’t written the paper herself, and gone off to find out who did write it, taking less than one second to come up with it.  By way of defense, she said, "I wrote this paper in high school."

          I also don’t know what to say about a high school teacher who wouldn’t question a student Hamlet paper that used phrases like Fortinbras’ "constitutional dispossession."  The Dean believes that the paper was plagiarized twice - once in High School and a second time in college.  To "ice the plagiarism cake," the student turned in a rough draft of her research paper - which also "read wrong" in terms of diction and syntax.  When questioned about this, she said "I turned that in last semester in English 103."  

          The student also said, "I am an ‘A’ student.  I would never cheat."  When I said, "this paper and your research paper aren’t like the other papers that I do believe are your own work," she responded with, "I only spent an hour or two on those papers."

          Those were hours better-spent than the few minutes it likely took to plagiarize the Hamlet paper and the research paper.

          "What grade did you get on your research paper last semester in English 103?"

          "A ‘B+,’" the student said.

          The other instructor, whose office is next to mine, said that she had awarded the paper a "C."

 Since the grades were already finalized for the previous semester, there was no point in my telling the other instructor that I thought that large portions of this research paper were likely plagiarized - the first two-thirds, I believed.  Cutting-and-pasting and slapping a paper together like that between someone else’s words and your own would result in a "C" or worse - if the plagiarism was not discovered.

          When I talked to other students about plagiarizing papers online, most of them were shocked at how much papers cost, and surprised that people would pay that much money just to avoid doing the work.  When we talked about the "free essays" that were available, they all said, "Why would you take that chance?  If they’re free, how good are they anyway?"  Even if you get behind on your work - and you can only spend an hour or two, like the student said that she had - you will still get a better grade than the "F" you’ll receive if you are caught plagiarizing.  The absolute mildest penalty that an instructor can award for plagiarism is to give the student an "F" for the assignment.  

My initial attitude after I discovered the plagiarism was that the student had become desperate due to pressure of a lot of assignments being due, and perhaps that she had personal problems.  So far as I knew, this was a legitimate student who’d gotten into trouble and made a very bad choice.  I was going to give the mildest penalty:  an "F" for the assignment.  If she confessed to taking this desperate action, I was even willing to offer her an option for make-up or extra credit, as long as she did her own work.  But she did not confess.  I was asked to believe that not one, but two, unknown Internet bandits stole the paper from her computer and put it on a free essay site.  And then she said that this was a high school paper, supposedly, that had been turned in without discussion or permission in my class.  Then, I learned that her research paper was from last semester in another class.  And though I didn’t want to go through the whole time-consuming plagiarism search again, I believed that this student didn’t write large portions of that paper, either.  It read like more poorly-digested criticism.

          Hard to say what the truth really is, except that this student didn’t write the Hamlet paper - "Artist_of_1999" did from the planetpapers.com Internet site.  By inventing elaborate stories instead of accepting responsibility, this student talked herself out of the initial mild penalty, received an "F" for the entire course, and is now facing four separate, well-documented charges of academic integrity violations.  The rules of our University state that students have a file set up after one violation, and if a second violation comes in, no matter how minor it might be, they are dismissed from the University.

Dismissed means "kicked out" - permanently.  The registrar writes "dismissal for violations of academic integrity" on the transcript.  That transcript will follow the student to any future school.  The only way to avoid other schools finding out in the future is to go without financial aid of any kind.  These days, the same computers that make Internet plagiarism so easy can track plagiarists who have been caught from any school to any school that participates in the Federal financial aid system.

          I don’t know any teacher who "makes it their mission" to discover every instance of plagiarism in their classes.  And if my classes are any evidence, I don’t think that hard-core plagiarism is that common.  This is the first instance I’ve had of out-and-out copying a whole paper from the Internet in four years of teaching, and as soon as I read a few sentences from this paper, I could tell that there was something wrong.  

          But on the very same day that I discovered this paper’s identical twin on planetpapers.com, the chairman of my department bought an Internet paper from one of the sites that offers them for sale - word-for-word the same as a paper that was turned in to one of his classes.  This occurred at a Southern California university of about 8,000 students, in the same department, and on the very same day.  Nearly every other instructor in my department has had some problems with plagiarism this semester, although these two incidents were the most clear-cut and the most dramatic.

          As the Dean of Students asked the young woman who plagiarized in my class, "Why would you want to plagiarize this paper?  The person you are cheating most is yourself."  This student now faces very severe consequences, but in addition to that, what type of education was she receiving?  There’s no way to know how many papers she has copied from the Internet, or recycled, and turned in to different classes.  She already made the choice - even if you believe her story of computer hackers stealing from her hard drive - to turn in a high school paper to a college class, and to turn in a paper from another college class to a second class.  That shows no commitment to learning, much less actual learning taking place in her case.  

          Sadly, she may never know the truth:  the papers that she said only took her an hour or two to write were better than the papers she plagiarized.  They were her own work, even if she was doing them hastily.  I have many students who work full-time jobs, or who have family commitments that mean that they have to study late at night or early in the morning under a lot of pressure.  There’s never been any question that these hard-working students weren’t putting in the hours of study that are required for an "A" in college-level classes.  It seems bizarre, but the only students I’ve ever questioned, or who have had trouble doing their work and turning it in on time, have been ones who didn’t have jobs outside of school, and had no family commitments.  In other words, they were in an ideal position to study during normal daytime hours and to have active social lives.  But they chose not to do so.  They had lots of free time, and they were investing it very unwisely.

          If you plagiarize in college and get caught, at the very least you’ll get an "F" - the grade you were trying to avoid in the first place.  At most, the school will dismiss you and you’ll have a permanent record of being a cheater.  

          But let’s just say that you do it, and you get away with it.  Why not ask yourself why you’re in college in the first place?  If you put in the time and effort, you will leave college with two things, and one thing is a lot more important than the other, no matter what you might think.  The first thing is your degree, or "sheepskin."  You’ll have a piece of paper that proves you were there - you "did the time" and you have completed all the requirements for that degree.  This degree will ensure that you get a better job after graduation, and that you can go on to graduate or professional school if that is your goal.

          The second thing you get is what actually happens during your four years of college:  you’ll learn and you will grow.  At the end of the four years, you’ll be a different person than the one who arrived on that first day of Freshman orientation.  You’ll be more confident, more capable, and more skilled in countless ways.  

          The student who plagiarized in my class made no growth of any kind that I could see over the semester.  Eventually, she quit even trying to do her own work, taking the plagiarism route.  I’m sure that she feels that this is "my fault."  Probably it was her high school teacher’s fault, too, and the fault of the other teacher in her English class last semester.  It’s probably "the fault" of every teacher in every class where she’s ever cheated.  It might be "the fault" of the whole educational system that seems to have rewarded her for being a cheater up to this point.  Maybe it’s even her parents’ fault, for "pressuring her."  Now she’s going through a real "learning experience" that she cannot avoid by copying, plagiarizing, lying, failing to do the reading, or by skipping class and making up some feeble excuse later.  She is caught in a situation that she created because of her own actions and statements -- with severe consequences, nowhere to turn, and no way out.  

          At some point, maybe the "lesson" that most of us learn as little kids will get across to her:  do your own work no matter what grade you get.  When she realizes this, she’ll have to face her own weaknesses and inadequacies as a student.  She’ll have to figure out why she was so eager to copy someone else’s work instead of doing her own, why she thinks she’s better than those other "dumb" students who have been doing the work, and why it’s so easy for her to lie, and so hard for her to tell the truth.    

          And that is a very important skill that I do teach to my writing students who do their own work.  I hope that you have understood every word that I’ve written here.  My job is to teach students how to write and think well and honestly - thinking for themselves, not anybody else. That’s one of the most important skills that anyone can have in any field - from education to business to law to medicine.  

          Yes, what the Dean said was true.  Every time you cheat, the person you cheat the most is yourself.  If you do your work honestly, even if you don’t get the grade that you hoped for, eventually you will get those grades.  You’ll be the real "A" student.  You will surpass your teachers - and that’s something that every good teacher stands up and cheers to see.  You can look at yourself in the mirror and feel genuine pride, confidence and accomplishment.  

          Even if you’re the most practical, success and money-oriented person in the world, seeking to get through college with the least investment of time possible - think about doing your own work as an investment.  If you buy a paper over the Internet, you are truly wasting that money, whether or not you get caught, because by doing that, you’re not learning anything except "how to cheat."  If you "get one free," then you know what they say:  "you get what you pay for."  And if you’re more interested in ethics and morality than the "bottom line," consider the other thing that most kids learn in Kindergarten and at home:  the good old Golden Rule.  Treat others as you would like to be treated.  

          Becoming a teacher was not the hardest thing I’ve ever done, nor was completing four years of college and three years of graduate school.  Becoming a professional writer was the hardest thing I’ve ever done, and in order to do that, I had to sit down and do the work, one word at a time.  I have just written something of the length, and with the organization, facts and reference to "real events" that is similar to a term paper in an upper-division or graduate-level course, and I’ve done it in about an hour and a half.  I couldn’t do that when I was a student.  It took me hours of sweat and toil to write papers, just like everyone else.  It is only a lifetime of writing and work - and not plagiarizing - that got me to this point.

No matter what you want to do for a living, or where you hope to be when you graduate from college, one thing is certain:  your future dream job is probably not "professional plagiarist."  Believe it or not, there is such a thing.  I learned about a real professional forger and plagiarist who stole the work of several good writers a couple of years ago:  he’s doing 7 to 10 in the Florida State Penitentiary.  He’s pursuing his "writing career" by copying other writers from prison, except he can’t cash any of the checks he dishonestly earns.  They don’t let prisoners earn money that way in Florida.

Whatever field you enter, you’re going to have to learn and demonstrate real skills in that field, and the only way that you can do that is through learning and practice.  But again, you don’t have to learn that lesson from me, or from any other teacher, or even from the guy in the Florida State Pen.  You could learn it the way my student is learning it right now:  the hard way.  By doing it and experiencing the results.

 

copyright © 2001, Amy Sterling Casil